Score: 10

"hahaah i can relate to this"

submission: -Ctrl + Z-

date: August 14, 2007

without my ctrl + z keys it would be a lot harder to animate. erasing all the lines would be a real bitch.

yes

God Bless Ctrl + Z ...

Score: 10

"what tha fuc fuddr"

submission: D4ilytoon # 318

date: August 11, 2007

one of those wasnt mine i made two

and one of mine you put in ther wasnt the complete version

o well i still give it uh 5-10

Score: 10

"Amazing in my opinion"

submission: -=Acid Collab=-

date: August 8, 2007

truly a work of art

Score: 10

"Here's how it goes"

submission: Kazahana: No Exit

date: August 3, 2007

From your first point of view, grab the soap, towel, hose and body wash. (the body wash is hard to see but it's small and behind that little bowl thing on the floor

then enter the code into the safe. 1545. get the items inside. then, use the body wash on the tub. use the scissors on the tub, where that mark is. use the hose on the tub's opening. then go back to the faucet and use the body wash on it. grab the knob. go back to the tub. go into the tub and attach the knob to the end of the hose in there. then go back outside the tub and pull on the hose. click on the pentagram picture above the tub. grab the wrench. leave and go back to your first point of view.

use the wrench on the faucet. grab the key. use the key on the locked door, and go into the toilet room. grab the teddy bear, and then click on the top part of the toilet, and grab the slingshot. combine the slingshot with the soap (by clicking on one and then the other in your inventory). select the loaded slingshot and use it on the ceiling light. go back into the toilet and click on the blue square on the wall to get the katana. stuff the teddy bear down the toilet to clog it up, and then slash the toilet with the katana.

you win.

Score: 7

"cute"

submission: |~Hug Me To The Skies~|

date: July 7, 2007

i liked what you were going for here, the whole concept was interesting, especially the character outfits, designs, and the whole cityscape itself. the whole thing was cute and you did it pretty good. the only negative things I have to say about it are

- a lot of rough animation
- expressions were way too anime-like, kind of annoying
- lipsync wasn't very thurough
- some things lacked a lot of detail and were lazily tweened

overall, it was pretty good. nice music too

-anigenbot

Score: 10

"oh hey"

submission: DailyTron07072007

date: July 7, 2007

hey sinista pretty ace stuff you got there

Score: 10

"hardcore."

submission: Joey's Bright Idea

date: July 6, 2007

one of your best movies yet. very good, this will definitely get something man, that is if the ng kids can comprehend it >:U

Score: 5

"shame"

submission: NARUTO: The Musical

date: June 19, 2007

you can obviously draw and animate ok why do you waste it on naruto and 4chan humor

Score: 6

"interesting"

submission: Haphazard Episode 1

date: June 13, 2007

there were many aspects in which this flash either would either impress someone or really piss them off.

im really not big on the whole "zany nonsensical random" humor crop. there are a lot of animations on newgrounds like blockhead that try this. true humor comes from satire, wit, and for the occasional 4chan faggot, the latest fad (this any flash can do without however). the humor here didn't have really any of this. the way this was done struck me as an attempt to fit the "random" mold, which didnt go over well with me here

however on the serious side of things like the art and animation things went a little different - the art was really good. although the characters are quite simplistic, you made up for it with what you did with it. the whole thing kept a consistant style and that was good

in places the animation was really smooth. other places it looked really choppy, halfassed and even of poor quality. overall there was a good amount of framebyframe so I guess that was fine

overall the suggestions I can offer is: maybe try basing the sequel on having more witty or clever humor. you could make it so the animation was more clean and the movements don't feel as out of whack. whenever a character made a movement it felt as if you didnt have any consistancy, but you had the fbf generally out of proportion and unrealistic overall

anyway i hope my suggestions helped (:

love,

ur f00lish n00b anigen

Score: 5

"not really"

submission: Azumanga - Bonklers!

date: June 11, 2007

the lipsync in this cartoon is only the typical "anime 2 frame mouth moving" the rest is either tweened art that looks like it took five minutes to draw and color completely, or choppily animated framebyframe with wobbly lines. granted the art was good but how hard is it really to trace anime drawings from a manga book

sorry if im coming off as rude here but it would be a lot better if your art had a style of its own, the lipsync wasn't so effortless and the framebyframe had more effort redraws and smoothness to it. overall next time can you make your movie a little more detailed? thanks (: